First draft was completed on Monday .
Today Mr Bush saw it and said the following must be done : remove the unprofessional person from the documentary and instead film Mr Jones or another professional person and put them in instead . Secondly the sound is not synched with one of the interviews which makes it look strange .
To improve by next week Monday
Film Mr Jones and put title in such as professor of SOAS .
Film Mr Newall as well
Film Mr Dixon
Choose 2 out of those to include .
Maybe do a vox pop
Include some bbm views / facebook in note format
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